David Guinness

You also run the risk of people thinking you're stoned. :)

I like it! :) Although you do have several "he"s that I think may be missing "t"s.

Again, frankly- either make it rhyme perfectly, or don't. The choice is yours. But if you wish to have rhyme, it really must be perfect. I.E. Stream and Achieve do ...

This dart pierces me more than anyone one else Do you want the extra "one"? If I said I love you, would u say stay the same I would suggest ...

I think it has potential. But I must agree with The Black Rose- the rhyme feels a little too forced. Rhyme should feel very natural. For a song suggesting the ...

I really don't know what to say. This is... incredibly politically incorrect. :?

Greetings, Valerie! Hope to see you around the site! Check-in time is at 3 PM and free chocolate chip cookies are available at the front desk in the lobby.

Don't Mess With Texas... my goodness. Well, welcome to the Young Writers' Society. Hope to see you around.

Welcome to the YWS! Hope to see you around.

I prefer Standard, and the effort in coding shows (something positive, in my opinion). I like the more slimline look, as well as just being more cheery and modern and ...

The thing is, writing can always be improved. Always. Really, the only problems are very little things, especially in keeping the meter of the verse, the rhythm. I would suggest ...

"I'm not as nice as my husband." Well, her husband's not particularly nice... This is even more ridiculous than those fast food chain claims.

I actually was writing this as a sort of mini-mini-essay. But I see now I really can't do it justice like that. And I do have a million things to ...

A cello may be played by any person on this Earth. They may play regularly in a class or attend lessons. They may have all the technical development in the ...

Nice lyrics. I'll keep an eye out for the song if you'll post it. I'd like to hear it. As a big Beatles fan, anything with a Beatles reference catches ...